I think your clothes are great, but some of the photography doesn't do your collection justice. The black dress with the brown belt looks hot, as does the green and peach dress. The shots are simple, clean and modern. Try to show off all your garments in a unified ,coherent way.
Good luck. Anthony B... http://streetspaghetti.blogspot.com
Thanks for the thoughts...I think you are totally right. Everything is such a learning experience. Do you think it helps much to have a photo of the back of every single garment?
I think you should do a really clean , simple shoot of all items in your collection, and include the back of any items with an interesting detail at the back.
Use a simple backdrop and coherent lighting. Try to avoid distracting furniture etc. Don't use more than two models and keep the poses simple...not sexy or cheesey! It is all about presenting your clothes in the best way possible.
Anthony B.
PS. A friend of mine just did his look book for Gossip couture. His photos are on this network and they are exactly what you should aim for.